
We weren’t supposed to be down the far end of the school grounds. But the Gregory twins had chased me all the way. They’d left shouting they’d find a teacher to tell on me.
The hedge growled, shaking its twigs. Scary, but I was more frightened of the Gregory twins. I took out my lunch. The hedge snatched the sarnie. It wasn’t interested in the bread. But it devoured the ham. I held out my finger, pulled back before it could take a bite out.
I laughed. The Gregory twins smelled like pigs. Next time, I’d make them follow me.
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This is my entry for this week’s Friday Fictioneers. Click here for more than 80 stories (and counting) inspired by Melanie Greenwood‘s photo.
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Love it what a great idea. I love to write but always find the novel gets stuck in the middle so 100 word story sounds awesome. Enjoy the Journey
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What an interesting lunchtime you had! Interesting hedges in your area ,too. A great piece of flash, Sonya. 🙂
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Wow! You never fail to impress!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you, Jane!
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Excellent! I loved the twist!
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Brilliant, that’s so good to hear. Thank you for your feedback 🙂
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Dear Sonya,
I wonder if the hedge would be fooled. Cute story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for reading and leaving feedback, Rochelle. I love Friday Fictioneers, it’s such a great way to engage with many talented flash fiction writers.
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Oooh, I loved this. Those twins better watch out.
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Thank you, Tiffany! You’re right, they better had…
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Now there’s a plan! This little victim isn’t going to give in to bullying. I bet every victimised child wishes they could find a man-eating hedge to lure their persecutors into. Very clever.
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Thank you, Margaret! Yes, those hedges would be a bullied child’s dream, wouldn’t they?
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Look out, Gregory twins! Great idea.
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Thank you, Emily!
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