It’s the Things You Didn’t Do

The sun shines in through the portholes. Wooly hat girl will be out drawing, she’s always early. I almost gathered my courage to talk to her last time.

Out on the pontoon, I check for her. Someone else’s there. I approach him because it’s her stool, her sketchpad.

‘Where’s funny hat girl?’

He pinches his nose.

‘She wore ‘em hats ‘cos she didn’t want nobody to see her bald.’

‘Oh.’

‘She got so upset ‘bout not finishing the bloody drawing. Loved ‘em boats, she did.’

I spent hours watching her when I could have taken her out on the boat.

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FFfAW time again. I love Cat’s picture and I’m looking forward to reading the stories it has inspired.

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18 thoughts on “It’s the Things You Didn’t Do

  1. Was it the narrator who said, ‘She got so upset ‘bout not finishing the bloody drawing. Loved ‘em boats, she did’?

    I sensed that through his shock, horror, sorrow, and immediate regrets, he couldn’t stop talking. Even if a lump formed in his throat. So sad. My heart hurts.

    If only, if only . . .

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    1. For me, it’s the girl’s father who says it – I think the narrator is too stunned to say anything at this point. But you read it any way you want to. The thing with these hundred-worders is that I have to leave a lot to the reader’s imagination, so you make the story as much as I do…
      Thank you 🙂

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