I hear:
Lapping waves.
Birdsong.
I smell:
Wood and skin, warmed by the sun.
I taste:
The coffee she drank before she kissed me.
I feel:
Rough wood.
The breeze cooling my bare toes.
I see:
Nothing.
I imagine:
Her face. It’s never the same. Today, I want to brush my fingertips over freckles she may or may not have.
‘It’s beginning. Can you feel it?’
‘Don’t look at the sun.’
‘I know,’ she says. ‘It’s okay. I got those eclipse glasses.’
I see what she sees. I lost my sight in 99, I don’t want her to lose hers.
Excellent, Sonia. 🙂 Some lovely imagery and then that extremely powerful last line. Well written. 🙂
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Thank you, Millie!
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