Arriving at the beach, she reflected on her life.
It hadn’t been so bad, had it? Much better than expected, given where she’d started. It came down to her choosing the right companion. Despite that less than ideal start to their relationship. Despite their different backgrounds.
They’d refused to let those obstacles destroy them. Yes, they’d gone through trying times. Maybe they’d stayed together, during those times, to spite predictions that two people from opposite ends of society could never make it to ‘till death do us part’.
She kissed the urn, opened it and emptied his ashes into the ocean. She smiled through her tears.
‘Goodbye, my darling.’
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I read this week’s MFtS’s first sentence and the picture of an old woman with an urn in her hands popped into my head. If only it were that easy every day… Click here for more stories.
Aah, a poignant story.
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Thank you, Sally!
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Had tears in my eyes with your last line! Nicely done! Thank you Sonya for writing again for the MFtS challenge. See you next week? Hope so. Be well… ^..^
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Thank you, Barbara! You really made it easy this week. I’ll be back next week – I love how the starting sentence makes me go in directions I wouldn’t necessarily take on my own 🙂
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Thank you Sonya! I am happy that you are enjoying the challenge! Be well…
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Ok, now I feel bad for what I did to the lady in my story. Nice touching story.
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Thank you! I normally do horrible things to my characters – don’t feel bad 😀
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I loved this story Sonya! Beautiful!
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Thank you, PJ 🙂
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I need a tissue… lovely emotional story. Thanks!
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Thank you 🙂
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An emotional story, very well told! Good job Sonya!
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Thank you!
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What a release! Nicely done!
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Thank you 🙂
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A beautifully sad well written story of a special moment. Lovely work Sonya 🙂
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Thank you for the lovely words, John!
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Beautifully written. The ending was sad but lovely.
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Thank you, Margo! Sad but lovely was exactly what I hoped for!
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True love…Nicely done.
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Thank you 🙂
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A beautiful story Sonya.
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Thank you 🙂
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Lovely story. Quite a sad end but it sounds like she has fond memories of a happy life with him.
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Thank you! I was going for bittersweet 🙂
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Beautiful story, Sonya. At least they managed to live a happy life together before he was taken from her. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you, Louise!
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Lovely story, Sonya. Great description and well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne 🙂
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