All Show

100 words about being infatuated with a rock star
FFfAW 55 photo prompt by Dark Rider

He’s got this lethal way of handling his guitar and he’s sooo hot with it she thinks she’ll melt. All gig long he’s been looking at her. At HER! For a moment at the end she imagines he’ll pull her out of the crowd. More likely he’s told his security guy to let her through backstage.

She fluffs her hair as she approaches. The security guy, it turns out, is a gal.

‘He’s waiting for me,’ she says.

‘Sorry, sweetie. He isn’t.’

Ms. Security wiggles her ring finger at her. His name’s tattooed on it.

‘All part of the show.’

49 thoughts on “All Show

  1. Haha. A little bit cruel, him making eyes at her all performance and then the security guard turns out to be his wife. Funny Sonya! Great take.

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  2. You did a great job capturing the rapture and excitement of a fan falling in love (er, lust) with someone’s performance, only to have to face reality at the end of the show.

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  3. Great buildup! Wonderful voice.
    Yeah, at the crush of the concert, down on the floor, right in front of the stage, they do seem to be singing right at ya — not that I’d know from an experiences of my own. 😉

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  4. You’ve perfectly captured the voice of the infatuated fan! Hiring his wife as his security guard is definitely an effective way of keeping them at bay – though hopefully she doesn’t ‘cramp his style’ too much. Great story, Sonya. 🙂


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