
‘Write everything down: how, where and when. Include the address and photos.’
‘You told me already. It’s all here.’
‘He’ll meet you at the castle, Sunday at three. Up the stairs, through the three arches. He’ll be waiting on the platform.’
‘And then?’
‘You hand over the money and your notes. Then you tell him what you want him to do.’
‘But I’ve written it all down.’
‘You tell him. He needs to be convinced you mean it.’
‘I don’t understand.’
‘He’s a professional. He won’t accept the job unless you really want to order a hit on your husband.’
I truly like your writings!
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Thank you, Thomas, that’s very kind of you to say!
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Brief but detailed. Love it!
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Thank you 🙂
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Sinister, sinister stuff! Love how you kept that nugget of nasty information until the end. Very nicely done
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Thanks Lynn! Was the only way, really, to reveal it like that at the end. 😀
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The only good way, anyway. A good story 🙂
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Good story. It raises so many questions.
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Thanks, Jenn!
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It’s amazing, thank you for sharing it! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Wow intense! She wants to bump of her hubby? Divorce isn’t enough?
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Great story! Sounds like it might be FBI in disguise! Especially since they want her to “tell” him.
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Thanks, PJ!
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Oh my, I wonder if she went through with it the end! Great piece of storytelling 🙂
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I’ve just written a longer first draft of this – I think the answer is yes. Thanks, Angie 🙂
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Fantastic, I would love to read it sometime 🙂
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That ending though! ❤
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Heh, thanks 🙂
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Chilling. For all this care, he better not miss!
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Thanks, Jon!
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Precision.
Detailed and well written.
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Thank you!
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Oh my, shocker ending! Great job!
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Thanks, Amanda!
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Definitely chilling! So many other people interpreted the retreating person as sad, but you saw him as sinister — and now that I read your story, I totally see that too.
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Yes, I tend to see the worst in people :D. Thanks, Joy!
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Putting things down on paper may not be a good idea… Great surprise ending. 😀
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Yes, I agree… Thanks, Jessie 🙂
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Oh! Wow! What a twist!!!
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thanks 😀
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It is my pleasure, Sonya!:)
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Brilliant and a great read!!
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Great build up to the reveal at the end, Sonya. I wonder whether she’ll actually go through with it. Really well done. 🙂
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Thank you. I don’t know if she will… The man reminded me of Maseo from Arrow for some reason, so I couldn’t think past assassin/hitman …
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Oooooo….dark!
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Oh wow! We wrote on the same dark lines.
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“Professional”… I have seen situations like this not end well!
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I don’t think this one will, either …
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So clever Sonya. Just love it every time I read it!
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