
Same guy who tried to chat her up earlier’s waiting for her when she steps out of the ladies. He’d better try something stupid because splashing her face with cold water didn’t help. She’s still furious.
‘Lost your bodyguard?’
He takes a step towards her.
‘I wouldn’t.’
She has to warn him so she can say he’s been warned.
‘Or what?’
He lunges to grab her. She slams him to the floor. Before she gets to throw a punch, though, Herman stops her. He looms over the guy and snarks, ‘Didn’t your mum teach you never to talk to strangers?’
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It is, again, entirely coincidental that the Moral Monday’s prompt this week seemed tailor-made for one of my scenes today – cheers Nortina!
Hahahaha! Cute!
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Skillful inner detail, telling what’s happening in the mind. From the content, I hope others realize that power and rage exist in everyone. So take care and be respectful. Really well-done work. Thank you!
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Yes, if everyone just took a bit more care and was respectful… wouldn’t that be wonderful? Thank you!
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Thanks PJ! Sorry for my FFfAW absence this month, btw, but I can’t write an independent piece of flash and the novel side by side… I’ll be back in May, though 🙂
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Oh, good luck with your novel! That is wonderful! I look forward to you coming back in May.
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Well put lesson! I liked how she was the stranger, he shouldn’t be talking to. Take that creepy guy!
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Thanks, Amanda!
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You’re welcome!
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I laughed out loud! Excellent.
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Thanks a lot, Lisa 🙂
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I love this! “Don’t mess with this woman!” 😀
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Indeed – thanks Annie 🙂
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hahahahaha I could perfectly see it in my mind! — stranger danger —
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Thanks, Laura!
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Oh, that girl is lethal – and lookign for trouble. Can’t wait to see what she does next 🙂 Great idea to post exerpts btw – will have us all dying to read the book when it gets published 🙂
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Ha ha, you’ve seen through my cunning plan – glad you enjoy them 🙂
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Whip up demand before the supply hits the bookshelves – very clever 🙂
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Incredible!
I started blogging this month, and it is a pleasure that I came across your blog.
It has inspired me to start my next article.
Thank you:)
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Glad to be of service! Thanks for stopping by 🙂
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Ha! Funny how that works, huh? Great story, Sonya. 🙂
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