‘This is it?’
‘I said wait till you see the inside.’
‘But this is it? It’s surrounded by concrete. Looks like one of those chain pubs. Don’t say it used to be a pub.’
’It wasn’t a pub.’
‘Don’t lie, I’ll be able to smell.’
‘You ready to go in, then?’
‘There’s no privacy. Anyone can walk all around it.’
‘Let’s go in.’
‘Don’t you see it would be a waste of time? I don’t like it.’
‘You ought to see the inside.’
‘One glance. Won’t take more… Oh, wow! This is unexpected. Look at the fireplace. I love it.’
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For Moral Mondays and FFfAW.
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Nice!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome-I loved it! 🙂 Keep writing! Myra
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I love the story. Nice match for both prompts!
What’s fun when you contribute a picture is reading what others see in it. I’m going to alter my post so as to not give away too much.
Did you know you’re linked to one of my posts — https://phylor.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/nightmorning-therapy-20-the-idiot-flowers-and-a-nap/? Just in case it was by accident.
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Thank you! And yes, I know I linked to your post – I wanted to give people a way to find you if they wanted 🙂
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Thanks, 🙂
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Thank you. That was kind of you. 🙂
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Love the idea of living in an old pub! Such a fun and funny idea for fiction. I can see a whole storyline panning out from it. Great story, Sonya 🙂
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Reminds me of the saying, “Don’t judge a book by its cover.” Great story, Sonya!
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Thanks, PJ!
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Hehe great take. Don’t judge a book by its cover suits the story as well as this week’s moral 🙂
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Yes, absolutely. Thanks Amanda 🙂
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Great one! Sometimes our dislikes can quickly turn into likes!
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I laughed. Maybe because I like fireplaces, too. You’ve created great interplay between the characters.
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Sounds like conversations I’ve had…nice story!
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Ahhh, what truly matters is what’s on the inside, right? Hmmm, I wonder if the tap still works. 😉
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